THE ART OF SEDUCTION...

He grasped me firmly but gently, just above my elbow, and guided me into a room, his room. Then he quietly shut the door and we were alone.

Soundlessly, he approached from behind and spoke in a low, reassuring voice close to my ear.

“Just relax.”

Without warning, he reached down and I felt his strong, calloused hands start at my ankles, gently probing, and moving upward along my calves slowly but steadily. My breath caught in my throat. I knew I should be afraid, but somehow I didn’t care. His touch was so experienced, so sure.

When his hands moved up onto my thighs, I gave a slight shudder, and partly closed my eyes. My pulse was pounding. I felt his knowing fingers caress my abdomen, my ribcage. And then, as he cupped my firm, full breasts in his hands, I inhaled sharply. Probing, searching, knowing what he wanted, he brought his hands to my shoulders, slid them down my tingling spine to my panties.

Although I knew nothing about this man, I felt oddly trusting and expectant. This is a man, I thought. A man used to taking charge. A man not used to taking ‘no’ for an answer. A man who would tell me what he wanted. A man who would look into my soul and say …

“Okay, ma’am,” said a voice. “All done.”

My eyes snapped open and he was standing in front of me, smiling, holding out my purse. “You can board your flight now.”

Okay, you’ve probably all read that story before, and now you’re thinking it's a really weird thing for me to post and wondering what possessed me to do it. And... because you’ve read this far, I’m going to tell you.

You read this far because something in the title, or perhaps that first line...or even the photo...promised you something. You read even further because what you were reading was interesting in some way. Maybe it was titillating, or you thought it was funny…or maybe you know me and thought it was a bizarre thing for me to post. Or…maybe you really wanted to know what was going to happen next?

The excerpt is fiction…it’s a joke…a scene some think could be taken straight from a bad romance novel (or good depending on your point of view). But, for purposes of this blog, it’s an example of how to engage the reader and keep him reading. It's a very simple example in the art of verbal seduction.

The story started big and kept on going. You knew there was more to it, but you didn’t know what, so you kept reading. You kept reading because the beginning promised you something and you wanted to know if the story was going to fulfill its promise.

And it did with the punchline. But that’s not all…

You’re still reading because you know that story wasn’t all I was going to say. Why? Because with my blog title, I made a promise that I’m going to tell you something about the art of seduction. And…because this is a writer’s blog, I've made an unspoken promise to say something about writing.

So, I will.

Novelists must be experts in the art of seduction.

Whether you’re writing a romance novel or straight fiction, writers must persuade the reader to keep flipping pages. We do it by seducing him, trifling with his emotions. We toss out the emotional hook and draw him in. Whether we make the reader laugh, cry, or feel he needs to know more, we are engaging him emotionally.

Think about it. If we read something that makes us angry, or makes us rail at injustice, we are emotionally engaged. When we’re emotionally engaged, when we care about something…or the person we are reading about, we want to know what’s going to happen next and we keep reading.

We anticipate.

Anticipation causes tension and suspense. Tension and suspense, wondering what happens next is what compels us to keep flipping pages.

The relationship between your most wonderful character and the reader must be an emotional experience, one you tap into from page one. If we make a promise to the reader at the beginning of our story that something interesting is going to happen, he’ll keep reading.

Just like you did here.

Hey…if I got you to read this far, you know it works. Think about it. Why do you keep reading? What is it that pulls you into a story and keeps you reading?

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I'll be talking a lot more about this in my next online class “Infusing Your Story With Emotion” beginning May 27th. For more information about the class, go to http://www.bootcampfornovelists.com/ls-courses/l-course-5p-emotion.html

For more information about all classes, and about me, go to http://www.bootcampfornovelists.com/

The Rules of Engagement...

The Rules of Engagement...

No, I’m not talking about Prince William and his new fiancé, winsome commoner, soon-to-be-royalty, Kate. Or is it now Katharine? Actually, I could talk about the subject at length because I write romance novels and a tale of a Prince and a commoner falling in love and living happily ever after is a great story. But I won’t because you’ll soon hear more than you ever wanted to hear about the royal couple from the media...and because that’s not what I wanted to talk about. Besides, the Pygmalion/opposites attract theme sounds a little familiar, doesn’t it? Cinderella, Sabrina, The Way We Were, Pretty Woman, My Fair Lady, Breakfast at Tiffanys, Overboard, The King and I, African Queen and even Shrek are all variations on that theme, so really, it’s been done to death, hasn’t it.

Actually not. Those stories are, in a way, exactly what I was planning to talk about. The opposites attract/happily ever after stories, while seeming cliché, are timeless. They win readers’ (or movie fans) hearts. They win hearts because they contain certain elements that appeal to wide audiences. They win hearts because the authors followed The Rules of Engagement…and that is what I wanted to talk about.

Never heard of those rules? Me either, at least not formally. So, I’ll go ahead and create that rule right now. The way to make your story win readers’ hearts is to follow The Rules of Engagement.

Readers choose to buy a book because something about it interests them, be it an evocative title, stunning cover, an enticing back cover blurb or can’t-put-it-down first paragraph. Usually, it’s a combination of all of the above, and when that happens, the reader becomes engaged. But only temporarily. Our job as writers is to continue engaging…and that’s where The Rules come in.

I’m not a fan of rules in any art or craft…other than you have to know them in order to break them, but I absolutely believe certain elements must be present at the beginning of a story in order to engage the reader. Hence ... The Rules of Engagement. Not being a rule lover, I confined my rules to only those I feel are absolutely necessary. In order to engage a reader immediately, your story must have:

1. A sympathetic character the reader can identify with, worry about and root for
2. Empathy – universal emotions that the majority of readers can relate to
3. Emotional urgency – important action that hooks the reader instantly. The reader must know up front what’s at stake...what stands to be lost? In other words, conflict happens immediately.
4. An interesting setting – the setting enhances the emotion and tone of the story.

Notice anything about the above rules? They all involve eliciting emotions from the reader. Feelings are what keeps us engaged. In order to be truly engaged, the reader needs to be actively concerned about a character’s sanity, safety or soul. The reader must be interested in the story outcome. If that doesn’t happen-–if the reader doesn’t care what happens to the character, why read on? When I find myself reading a story I normally wouldn’t read, it’s because I care what happens. My emotions have been engaged. As authors, it’s our job to make the reader care about what happens.

Think about the best books you’ve read recently. Do they have all the elements above in...say...the first three to five pages?